[Bards] Throwing one to the Lions...
Fitzmorgan at cs.com
Sat Aug 4 10:47:59 PDT 2001
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In a message dated 8/4/01 10:38:54 AM Pacific Daylight Time,
Fitzmorgan at cs.com writes:
> First, since we haven't really discussed the subject of how to give
> usefull and reletivly painless comment the quality of comment may vary. I
> for one amy not sure that "I" know hay to give really usefull commentary but
> I'll give it a go. Rather than have a big rush of people sendign in things
> for critique I rather use this as a chance to launch the discussion on
> constructive criticism. So I submit my critique for critique.
Ok I'm going to critique my own critIque.
> Perhaps it is best that she's gone to her rest,
> But damned if don't I love her still.
That should be:
But damned if I don't love her still.
Running a spell check would have helped too.
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