[Bards] Warriors Of The Rose - A Poem

[Jane Sitton]

Very nice.  I have but one question:  in the line that
goes "who's honor, skill, and bearing shows...", I
think you mean "whose", rather than "who's" (who's =
who is).  I can be nit-picky, I know, but a different
word can significantly change the meaning.

Madelina de Lindesaya

--- Fitzmorgan at aol.com wrote:
> --
> [ Picked text/plain from multipart/alternative ]
>        I found an old notebook that had some poems I
> had written and forgotten.  Here is one of them that
> I wrote at Gulf War and performed just
> before the Ladies of the Rose Tournament.
>
>        WARRIORS OF THE ROSE
>
> Good Gentles all it pleases me.
> The privilege that is ours to see.
> The honor, skill and chivalry,
> Of all the world put on display,
> Before us on this field this day.
>
> The noble Ladies of the Rose.
> Bestowed their favor upon those,
> Who's honor, skill and bearing shows
> The high ideals we all hold dear.
> Our best and brightest gathered here.
>
> Good warriors of the Rose take heed,
> With honor let this list proceed.
> Neglect no great and noble deed.
> Come show us now what you can do.
> The Known World stands here watching you.

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