[Bards] A Lady's Freedom
lymadelina at yahoo.com
Tue Jul 22 15:09:50 PDT 2003
--- Marie Adams <marie.adams at visionoflove.net> wrote:
> I agree with Milo; I liked the piece very much,
> except maybe for the part
> at the end where the heroine killed her old fiancee.
> However, the setting
> is a battle, so someone had to die! ;-) -- Serena
Also, he was the bad guy, and had murdered innocents.
His fate was sealed. It is romantic to think of her
running off with him, leaving her wimpy husband, but
people in liege to her family had been killed, and
then someone would have to help look after her father,
so being the dutiful daughter and avenging the dead
vassals makes her a more noble figure, I thought.
Thank you for your kind words. I had not written
anything so long before this effort, but I felt it
took that long to tell the story.
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