[Bards] Poetic Exercise #6

[jerryn at houston.rr.com]

I like it, especially the reflections you used.

Gerald.

----- Original Message -----
From: Keely Disman <kdisman at yahoo.com>
Date: Thursday, October 16, 2003 10:31 am
Subject: RE: [Bards] Poetic Exercise #6

> Greetings,
> 
> I am just now beginning to broaden my bardic horizons into the 
> poetry realm.  So I figured I would give this a try.  Any feedback 
> is welcome and appreciated.
> 
> 
> Warrior proud upon the field,
> Field of Honor for the knight,
> Knight who wears the belt of white,
> Belt of white and golden chain,
> Golden chain for truest oaths,
> Oaths, on bended knee given,
> Given to his Liege, the King,
> The King, himself, a Warrior.
> 
> 
> Joan Hebert
> 
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