[Bards] Poetic Exercise #6

[Keely Disman]

Greetings,
 
I am just now beginning to broaden my bardic horizons into the poetry realm.  So I figured I would give this a try.  Any feedback is welcome and appreciated.
 
 
Warrior proud upon the field,
Field of Honor for the knight,
Knight who wears the belt of white,
Belt of white and golden chain,
Golden chain for truest oaths,
Oaths, on bended knee given,
Given to his Liege, the King,
The King, himself, a Warrior.
 
 
Joan Hebert
 
 
 


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