[Bards] Poetic exercise #1

Samuel E Orton iainmacc at juno.com
Wed Sep 3 06:28:32 PDT 2003


On 02 Sep 2003 20:11:16 -0500 Ulf Gunnarsson 
>If anyone is game, here is an ordinary phrase that could be brought to
>life.  Keep the meaning the same, but say it more poetic in 25 words 
>or
>less. 
>
>Sitting by the fighting field,
>I watch the fighters
>hit one another with sticks
>and listened to the noise.


Love of a game,
Of honor,
Of life.

All expressed in a single sound,
Not even a word.

	>>SMACK!<<

How marvelous our world is.

(24 words)

			In Joyful Service,

				Iain MacCrimmon


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