[Bards] Poetic Exercise #3

Marie Adams marie.adams at visionoflove.net
Tue Sep 23 08:48:50 PDT 2003

Wow, Anawyn! That second exercise you did was incredible! It made me catch
my breath. I also loved your spaniel one, even though it wasn't about a
person; it's adorable!! ---Serena

On Tue, 23 Sep 2003 Anawyn at aol.com wrote:

> Well, I am running late also and here are my offerings. The first one does
> not quite fit the true criteria, but it came first, and it is in the style, so
> ya get it anyway!:
> You dance upon two legs lighter than air
> The very heart of merriment and joy
> My world is shaped by one who barks and begs
> A tiny wagging spaniel, whirling toy!
> Now for the real thing, and it took a lot longer. I don't know why, but the
> iambic muse was slow to smile on me! Heh, heh:
>  My saddened gaze falls on blue eyes
> We meet again, my love of ages gone
> Undone, a blush melts my disguise,
> I stand, a ruined page time wrote upon
> Anawyn

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