[Bards] I fixed it.

[ED Reese]

Try this. It's better. 5-4-5 rhyme scheme in the Florentine style. Inspired
by HRM Miguel at his Coronation.

© 2004

ED Reese



Call to Estrella


Red arrow flying!

Black Star Rising

over Blood Red Sun.



Glory to be won!

Deeds to be done

on the fields of dread.



Falcon will be fed!

War lies ahead

for the Black Star’s foe.



Dealing the death blow!

Foeman will know

King’s swift sword striking!



Lancers are charging!

Hard hooves drumming;

to iron-shod attack!



Foemen reeling back!

Bows sing, axes hack

brave souls are dying.



Falcon is flying!

Black Star rising

over Blood Red Sun.



FYI, Blood Red Sun starts in caps for the same reason Falcon and Black Star
are.
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