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I like this version a lot!<br><br>
Anna<br><br>
At 03:25 PM 01/13/2004 -0600, you wrote:<br>
<blockquote type=cite class=cite cite><font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF">Try
this. It's better. 5-4-5 rhyme scheme in the Florentine style. Inspired
by HRM Miguel at his Coronation.</font><br>
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<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>© 2004<br>
</font><font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>ED Reese<br>
</font><font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2> <br>
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<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><h1><font face="Times New Roman, Times"><b>Call
to Estrella</b></font></h1><font size=2 color="#0000FF"><br><br>
</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2> <br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Red
arrow flying!<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Black
Star Rising<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>over
Blood Red Sun.<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2> <br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Glory
to be won!<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Deeds
to be done<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>on
the fields of dread.<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2> <br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Falcon
will be fed!<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>War
lies ahead<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>for
the Black Star’s foe.<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2> <br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Dealing
the death blow!<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Foeman
will know<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>King’s
swift sword striking!<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2> <br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Lancers
are charging!<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Hard
hooves drumming;<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>to
iron-shod attack!<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2> <br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Foemen
reeling back!<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Bows
sing, axes hack<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>brave
souls are dying.<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2> <br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Falcon
is flying!<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>Black
Star rising<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
</font><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>over
Blood Red Sun.<br>
</font></div>
<font face="arial" size=2 color="#0000FF"><br>
<br><br>
</font><font face="Times New Roman, Times" size=2>FYI, Blood Red Sun
starts in caps for the same reason Falcon and Black Star are.<br>
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