[Bryn-gwlad] Bees

[Tim McDaniel]

On Wed, 18 Jul 2007, Goldweard <goldweard at yahoo.com> wrote:
> I was stung about 7-8 times as I was running back to the car
> (Through my pants).

[Opens mouth, realizes it's just too easy, closes mouth]

Dangling modifier there.  I suggest "I was stung about 7-8 times
(through my pants) as I was running back to the car.".

I hope you're feeling better.

Daniel Lindonium
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Tim McDaniel, tmcd at panix.com