[Bryn-gwlad] Bees

[Ysabeau]

~hands Daniel a cookie~

Good boy, Daniel!

Ysabeau


On 7/18/07, Tim McDaniel <tmcd at panix.com> wrote:
>
> On Wed, 18 Jul 2007, Goldweard <goldweard at yahoo.com> wrote:
> > I was stung about 7-8 times as I was running back to the car
> > (Through my pants).
>
> [Opens mouth, realizes it's just too easy, closes mouth]
>
> Dangling modifier there.  I suggest "I was stung about 7-8 times
> (through my pants) as I was running back to the car.".
>
> I hope you're feeling better.
>
> Daniel Lindonium
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> Tim McDaniel, tmcd at panix.com
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