ES - FW: AL - 5x8 Card Documentation

Vicki Marsh XaraXene at home.com
Mon Feb 5 16:10:38 PST 2001


Greetings, from Xene.

I apologize if you have received numerous copies of this post, but if you
aren't on the Ansteorra list, I wanted to share this information from
Mistress Gunnora.  This is the best explanation of "minimum standards" that
I know of.

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Since four different people asked me at Candlemass for copies of my article
on writing A&S documentation, I thought it might be good to repost the
information so folks can get it easily.  I am always personally available to
help with documentation, whether it's suggesting resources or reviewing
final documentation -- though it's best to ask me a few weeks before you
need it!

Permission to reprint in SCA newsletters and lists is explicitly granted.

HOW TO WRITE DOCUMENTATION FOR A&S ENTRIES
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The basics of almost any documentation can and should be possible to do on
one of those larger 5x8 index cards.

The harsh reality is that no one will read more than about a paragraph of
data anyway except in exceptional situations. Especially at a large event
such as Kingdom A&S or LPT, the judges are spread pretty thin and most will
not read at all, much less read a tome of research information.

Many successful artisans will place a clearly marked "DOCUMENTATION SUMMARY"
section at the head of a longer piece of documentation. This is an excellent
idea. As well, it is a good idea to actually create a 5x8 index card for
every entry with the "short form" documentation on it (in addition to the
longer explanation), and place it right next to the item, since some folks
are lazy and won't open your notebook containing the research.

DOCUMENTATION BASICS
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(1) "What is it (title, basic description)?" i.e., Reproduction of a 13th
Century Icelandic Whalebone Ear Spoon

(2) "How were similar items made in period?" Give the basics of the medieval
examples. i.e., "Earspoons were a common implement for personal hygiene used
throughout the Middle Ages, consisting of a small, spoon-shaped tool for
scraping the ears. They could be cast in silver, or carved from wood, bone,
antler or ivory. Some were very elaborate, including extensive ornamentation
on the handle. Some were worn as part of the day to day costume as well."

(3) "How was your item made? How is it like the medieval examples? Where
have you deviated from the medieval techniques, and why?"

This is the hardest area for most people. It is very important to explain
where you made design changes or substituted materials -- these things are
acceptable, but you must show that you understand how the real ones are
made, and don't allow the judges to think that you are trying to put one
over on them

i.e. "I used deer antler for this project since whalebone is obviously not
available to the modern Ansteorran. This was soaked in cold water for two
days, then boiled for 3 hours before working. I roughed out the shape with a
coping saw, then did close shaping whittling with a sharp penknife. Final
shaping involved the use of wet sanding, carving with engraving tools and
burins (using a Dremel tool for some areas as I don't possess some of the
tools that a medieval bone carver would have used), and finally buffing with
beeswax to shine the surface."

Sometimes you also need to explain the "why" of an item. For instance, a
13th century hatbox of molded leather designed to hold a reticulated caul
headdress, yet decorated with early Celtic designs will appear incongruous,
unless the judge reads the documentation to find an explanation: i.e.,
"Normally hatboxes of this period would have used Gothic design elements
similar to those found in church architecture, however, this box was
commissioned by Baroness Butshe Wanteditthatway, who requested the specific
designs utilized here."

DOCUMENTATION AND HONESTY
---------------------------------------

One thing to always avoid is DO NOT LIE IN YOUR DOCUMENTATION. Chances are
very good that *someone* who looks at your entry will know enough about it
to know if you are fibbing in your documentation, and you will come out
looking bad.

If you used a less than medieval technique or material, THAT'S OK! All the
judges want to see is that you know what the original item was, and how it
was made -- so for instance, if you used an acrylic white paint instead of
making your own (toxic) lead-based pigment, say so - and say why: "Normally
a lead-based pigment would have been used to create the white paint, but
since lead is toxic, I elected to use the safer acrylic white."

The same goes for construction. If you used a Dremel tool, a carving expert
can see the rotary nature of the cuts. Better to say, "Although medieval
craftsmen would have used a bit-and-brace and hand-burins, I have used a
Dremel tool for ease in construction."

 You won't lose points for a well-documented substitution, so long as you
explain why. Tell the judges why you did and why so they know that YOU know.
But don't try to lie in your documentation to make your project look
better - as often this technique backfires and makes YOU look worse!

REFERENCES
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Some events actually will specify a number of references. If so, be sure to
actually use at least the minimum number of references required. I do not
favor requiring X number of references, however, since different items may
need differing amounts of references to document them adequately.

For instance, if you are carving antler or bone, then MacGregor's "Bone,
Antler, Ivory and Horn" is a pretty much one-stop reference for many items,
though as a tertiary source it really should be supported by photos or other
sources. Sometimes a picture is literally worth a thousand words -- for
instance, the reticulated caul hatbox entered at Gulf Wars 1997, where the
only documentation was a museum postcard with the date and a photo of the
item - though additional sources on medieval leatherwork would have really
added a lot to the documentation.

However, as a rule of thumb, it is best to aim for no less than three good
sources. What is a good source? It depends on the field.

Usually a primary source is the best possible source, but a primary source
is THE ITEM ITSELF - for instance one of Queen Elizabeth's dresses is a
primary source. Janet Arnold's book, Queen Elizabeth's Wardrobe Unlock'd is
a secondary source, but a very good secondary source. A book review of
Arnold's book is a tertiary source.

Most of us will not have the opportunity to go to the European Museums and
see primary sources in person. So instead we rely upon secondary sources - a
picture of the item, an archaeological report describing the item, or a
painting by an artist of the period of the item.

If you can, try to have at least one primary source or one or two good
secondary sources. If you can't get this type of documentation, then you are
down to tertiary sources. For instance, MacGregor's "Bone, Antler, Ivory and
Horn" book is a tertiary source -- he has compiled the information from
archaeological reports about the items he describes. When using a tertiary
source, try to corroborate the evidence using other sources as well, such as
a photo from a museum catalog, or additional secondary and/or tertiary
sources that agree with your first source.

The terms primary, secondary and tertiary confuse many people. It's pretty
simple to understand. Think of a saint's relic: a primary relic is an actual
part of the saint - Saint Acutiaria's finger bone. A secondary relic is
something that the saint has touched, for example the clothing worn by St.
Winifred, or the Pieces of the True Cross. A tertiary relic is something
associated with the saint but which has never touched the saint, for
instance, a modern painting of the saint that weeps tears of myrrh.

It gets a little more confusing when you talk about academic sources. A
period painting of an object is a secondary source for the object, but the
painting is a primary source for the techniques of painting. So a source can
be primary in one context, and secondary in another.

To summarize the discussion of sources, do the best you can. Get the best
sources you can find, and corroborate your sources by finding other sources
that also verify the point you are making.

DOCUMENTATION STYLE
---------------------------------------

The other thing that scares people about documentation is the Fear of
Documentation Style stricken into their hearts while doing research papers
in school. Really, putting down a bibliographical reference or a footnote is
simple. All should have the same basic elements:

AUTHOR. ARTICLE TITLE. BOOK TITLE. PLACE OF PUBLICATION. PUBLISHING COMPANY.
DATE OF PUBLICATION. PAGE ON WHICH THE INFO IS FOUND.

The exact punctuation and presentation of this material doesn't matter, so
long as it's all present. The idea is to make it possible for the interested
reader to track down your sources and read more about your topic.

Still, it is a good idea to use a Style Guide to make sure that you are
getting all the data down that you need, and that you are presenting the
documentation consistently. I recommend that you get a style guide (you can
buy them cheap as used books from Half Price Books or from College
bookstores, and now you can even find the info on the Web) and always use
it. Some common style guides are:

* Kate Turabian. "A Manual of Style" (a subset of the Chicago Manual of
Style)

* Chicago Manual of Style (used widely by newspapers and book publishers)

* The Modern Language Association (MLA) Manual of Style (used widely in the
humanities)

* The American Psychology Association (APA) Style Guide (used widely in the
sciences)

ADDITIONAL DOCUMENTATION
---------------------------------------

The most valuable additional documentation that you can add would be
pictures of the medieval examples that inspired the current work. People
will almost always look at pictures.

If you have done additional in-depth documentation, go ahead and write it up
and include it. Place at the top of the first page a clearly marked
"DOCUMENTATION SUMMARY" section, and keep that to one good-sized paragraph.
Follow that then with "ADDITIONAL DOCUMENTATION" and then continue with the
rest of your paper. Everybody will at least glance at the summary info, and
those who have a real interest will be more likely to read the whole thing.

Additional supporting materials, such as xerox copies etc. can be added at
the back.

If you put together 5 or more pages of documentation, seriously consider
converting your long-form documentation into an article for Tournaments
Illuminated. One thing we expect of Laurel candidates is that they have
proved themselves to be teachers -- and a T.I. article teaches thousands of
people across the Known World. If you have a really long piece of research,
consider Compleat Anachronist instead.

PRESENTATION OF DOCUMENTATION
---------------------------------------

As has already been mentioned, it is a good idea to place the bare-bones
documentation basics on a 5x8 index card and place that right next to your
A&S entry.

The written information is best kept together in a ring binder. Some of the
best documentation I've seen is placed inside the clear acrylic sleeves, and
the sections are separated by tabs for easy reference. A notebook like this
can be quite valuable, as you don't have to reinvent the wheel (or your
documentation) for every A&S event you enter. Keep all your A&S
Documentation, you can never tell when you might need it again.

Provide a table of contents at the front, and number or label the dividing
tabs so that people can find the specific documentation that they want.

If you have a whole ringbinder full of many many documentation articles, you
may want to use a two notebook system, -- a larger notebook in which to
store your entire collection of documentation, and a smaller notebook
containing only the documentation for the work(s) being displayed at the
current event. Otherwise you may need to clearly divide the notebook into
sections "Works Being Shown Today" and "Past Documentation."

CONCLUSION
---------------------------------------

The most important rule of thumb is: don't confuse, bore, or attempt to
bamboozle the judges. The KISS principle applies to documentation (Keep It
Simple, Stupid) - get the basics explained up front, show what you did and
how you did it honestly, and document the information by showing your
sources. Documentation isn't really all that hard, and can be quite fun if
you approach it with the proper attitude.

::GUNNORA::

Gunnora Hallakarve, OL

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