[ANSTHRLD] Blazon

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Mon Feb 2 08:39:51 PST 2004


"BOWERMAN, MATTHEW S. (JSC-DV6) (USA)"
<matthew.s.bowerman1 at jsc.nasa.gov> wrote:
> I would love to talk to her very much.

Copyediting /dangling modifier nit: She might be more amenable if you
expressed it as "I would very much like to talk to her" ...

Daniel "No-Doz ... check ... OK, ready to talk to Rodrigo" de Lincolia
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Tim McDaniel, tmcd at panix.com; tmcd at us.ibm.com is my work address



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