[ANSTHRLD] Re: March 2005, Proof read review please

[Michael Houghton]

Howdy!

Acceptances

Ansteorra

Jeanette du Bois. Reblazon of device.

The sea-horse on Jeanette's device is a "natural sea-horse". I checked
the archive CD on this. Also, there is a gratuitous hyphen in "ad-dorsed".


Atlantia

Atlantia, Kingdom of. Household name change...

Absent guidance, the old name would be released...

Robert Pine. Household name...

Can't you just remove the discussion? Is there some issue that demands
discussion?


Calontir

Rhodri ap Ieuan ap Hywel. Device change.

What is the blazon and disposition of the old device?


East

Arielle Makcristyne. Holding name and device.

As noted, y'all need to cook up a holding name. In addition, looking ahead,
if the pended name is registered, y'all'l have to make sure to note the
change of holding name at that time.


Lochac

Lochac, Kingdom of. Order name Order of the Nock.

The word "orifices" is misspelled "orifaces" in the discussion.


Outlands

{Th}orvaldr {Th}{o'}r{o'}lfsson {a'} Vaksfjall. Name change...

As noted, what is the disposition of the old name?



Returns

East

Anne Whyte. Name.

The note about the holding name has an extraneous 'E' at the end.


yours,
Herveus

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