[Loch-Ruadh] my website tell me what you think please

[Elizabeth Hawkwood]

Yeah! Another English Teacher/Editor/Grammer Junkie!
I no longer feel alone.

/Elizabeth

pasteg at earthlink.net wrote:
> Greetings Kylan,
>
> I have just looked at your website and I'm impressed.  The color scheme is
> very bold and dramatic and the web links worked for me.
>
> I noticed a few spelling/grammer errors.
>
> Instead of "my really name", try "my real name".
> Instead of "crazy picture", try "crazy pictures".
> Instead of "those kind of sites",  try either "those sites" or
>     "those kinds of sites".
> Instead of "were you will be able to", try "where you will be   able to".
>
> For Alita's (or Kythriana's ? ) page, instead of "fell free", try "feel
> free".
>                                                                  The fairy
> picture was exceptional.
>
> Now are you sorry you asked?
>
>         Grainne
>
>
>
>>[Original Message]
>>From: Kylan Ulfgierrson <kylan__ at hotmail.com>
>>To: <house_broken_axe at yahoogroups.com>; <loch-ruadh at ansteorra.org>
>>Date: 06/10/2003 10:52:03 AM
>>Subject: [Loch-Ruadh] my website tell me what you think please
>>
>>
>>http://pages.sbcglobal.net/kylanulfgierrson/
>>
>>
>>Harra Kylan Ulfgierrson
>>Former War Chieftain of House Broken Axe
>>Soon to be again, well one day... I hope...
>>In service to the dream...
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