[Loch-Ruadh] my website tell me what you think please

[Patricia Stegall]

Greetings Kylan,

I have just looked at your website and I'm impressed.  The color scheme is
very bold and dramatic and the web links worked for me.

I noticed a few spelling/grammer errors.

Instead of "my really name", try "my real name".
Instead of "crazy picture", try "crazy pictures".
Instead of "those kind of sites",  try either "those sites" or
	"those kinds of sites".
Instead of "were you will be able to", try "where you will be 	able to".

For Alita's (or Kythriana's ? ) page, instead of "fell free", try "feel
free".
                                                                 The fairy
picture was exceptional.

Now are you sorry you asked?

		Grainne


> [Original Message]
> From: Kylan Ulfgierrson <kylan__ at hotmail.com>
> To: <house_broken_axe at yahoogroups.com>; <loch-ruadh at ansteorra.org>
> Date: 06/10/2003 10:52:03 AM
> Subject: [Loch-Ruadh] my website tell me what you think please
>
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> http://pages.sbcglobal.net/kylanulfgierrson/
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>
> Harra Kylan Ulfgierrson
> Former War Chieftain of House Broken Axe
> Soon to be again, well one day... I hope...
> In service to the dream...
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