[Bards] Throwing one to the Lions...

Fitzmorgan at cs.com Fitzmorgan at cs.com
Sat Aug 4 10:47:59 PDT 2001

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In a message dated 8/4/01 10:38:54 AM Pacific Daylight Time,
Fitzmorgan at cs.com writes:

>        First, since we haven't really discussed the subject of how to give
> usefull and reletivly painless comment the quality of comment may vary.  I
> for one amy not sure that "I" know hay to give really usefull commentary but
> I'll give it a go.  Rather than have a big rush of people sendign in things
> for critique I rather use this as a chance to launch the discussion on
> giving
> constructive criticism.  So I submit my critique for critique.

Ok I'm going to critique my own critIque.

>         Perhaps it is best that she's gone to her rest,
>         But damned if don't I love her still.

That should be:

             But damned if I don't love her still.

       Running a spell check would have helped too.


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