[Bards] Poetic exercise #1

[Fitzmorgan at aol.com]

In a message dated 9/2/2003 8:12:56 PM Central Standard Time, ulfie at cox.net 
writes:


> 
> If anyone is game, here is an ordinary phrase that could be brought to
> life.  Keep the meaning the same, but say it more poetic in 25 words or
> less. 
> 
> Sitting by the fighting field,
> I watch the fighters
> hit one another with sticks
> and listened to the noise.
> 
> Ulf Gunnarsson
> 
> 


Watching the warriors,  Waiting while sitting
Hearing the hard blows,  Heavy in battle.


Sitting by the field
Watching the warriors fighting
Thud. "Good!" Fight's over

Robert


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