[Bards] Poetic exercise #1

[Darius of the Bells]

>From my ensconced position near the lyst  I observed as mighty warriors did
pumel each other with cudgels and marveled at the clamorous din.

Exactly 25
Darius
----- Original Message -----
From: "Ulf Gunnarsson" <ulfie at cox.net>
To: "Ansteorran Bardic list" <bards at ansteorra.org>
Sent: Tuesday, September 02, 2003 8:11 PM
Subject: [Bards] Poetic exercise #1


> If anyone is game, here is an ordinary phrase that could be brought to
> life.  Keep the meaning the same, but say it more poetic in 25 words or
> less.
>
> Sitting by the fighting field,
> I watch the fighters
> hit one another with sticks
> and listened to the noise.
>
> Ulf Gunnarsson
>
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