[ANSTHRLD] "I want a device. Now what?"

[HerrDetlef]

Much better! Now the comments should be rolling in.

At first glance, it looks like you have a good structure for presenting
ideas and all. There are a few stylistic and grammatical issues, but you'll
get those cleaned up when you do your final edit.

I liked what I saw.

Detlef

On Sat, Sep 11, 2010 at 7:42 PM, Joseph Percer <jpercer at gmail.com> wrote:

> I uploaded it to my google documents and set it public with the link
>
>
> https://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B39xF3x--KvPN2I4YWU3ZjQtZDhjMi00M2IxLWIzMGQtNWVlNWQ5ODk1MTdi&authkey=CMLkg5AP&hl=en
>
> Jayme
>
> On Sat, Sep 11, 2010 at 3:22 PM, HerrDetlef <herrdetlef at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > I don't think the list server will allow attachments. If you sent a .doc
> > file, I didn't get it.
> >
> > Perhaps you could load it up to a website and then link it on here?
> >
> > Detlef
> >
> > On Sat, Sep 11, 2010 at 3:07 PM, Joseph Percer <jpercer at gmail.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > > Okay I've hammered together a very rough draft. I welcome any and all
> > > suggestions as technical writing is really not my strong-suit. Is there
> > > somewhere I can stick this thing for ease of access?
> > >
> > > Also: Can everyone open a .doc (MS Word) file? Would it be better to
> > > convert
> > > to PDF?
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > >
> > > Jayme
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-- 
He has told you, O mortal, what is good;
and what does the LORD require of you
but to do justice, and to love kindness,
and to walk humbly with your God?
--Micah 6:8