[ANSTHRLD] "I want a device. Now what?"

[Joseph Percer]

Appreciate the comments, do you feel that it generally flows well from one
point to the next? I felt like I had a little trouble keeping it all
organized.

Any important points missed?

Jayme

On Sat, Sep 11, 2010 at 10:57 PM, HerrDetlef <herrdetlef at gmail.com> wrote:

> Much better! Now the comments should be rolling in.
>
> At first glance, it looks like you have a good structure for presenting
> ideas and all. There are a few stylistic and grammatical issues, but you'll
> get those cleaned up when you do your final edit.
>
> I liked what I saw.
>
> Detlef
>
> On Sat, Sep 11, 2010 at 7:42 PM, Joseph Percer <jpercer at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > I uploaded it to my google documents and set it public with the link
> >
> >
> >
> https://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B39xF3x--KvPN2I4YWU3ZjQtZDhjMi00M2IxLWIzMGQtNWVlNWQ5ODk1MTdi&authkey=CMLkg5AP&hl=en
> >
> > Jayme
> >
> > On Sat, Sep 11, 2010 at 3:22 PM, HerrDetlef <herrdetlef at gmail.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > > I don't think the list server will allow attachments. If you sent a
> .doc
> > > file, I didn't get it.
> > >
> > > Perhaps you could load it up to a website and then link it on here?
> > >
> > > Detlef
> > >
> > > On Sat, Sep 11, 2010 at 3:07 PM, Joseph Percer <jpercer at gmail.com>
> > wrote:
> > >
> > > > Okay I've hammered together a very rough draft. I welcome any and all
> > > > suggestions as technical writing is really not my strong-suit. Is
> there
> > > > somewhere I can stick this thing for ease of access?
> > > >
> > > > Also: Can everyone open a .doc (MS Word) file? Would it be better to
> > > > convert
> > > > to PDF?
> > > >
> > > > Thanks,
> > > >
> > > > Jayme
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