[Sca-cooks] OP/OT: update on Controversial Florilegium article

[Elaine Koogler]

Well, there I'm not so sure.  According to Bear, she's 20 years old, which
means that she is of college age...so it should show a little more
sophistication and writing skill than it does.  By sophistication, I do
believe that perhaps some of the "rant" tone should be soft-pedaled.  What
she says is good...but the way she says it might be, to some folks,
offensive.  And I'm not just talking about those who behave in any of the
manners she describes.  I support the content of the article, but believe
that, given her age, she should perhaps not be so confrontational.

Kiri

On Tue, Aug 11, 2009 at 5:48 PM, wyldrose <wyldrose at tds.net> wrote:

> I think the article is very good, and folks should understand that the
> writing should be  not be judged at a 'college' level.  If she wants to
> rewrite it at a future date, then that is fine, but for now, I think she did
> an awesome job.
>