[Bards] I fixed it.

[Cathy Polakoff]

I like this version a lot!

Anna

At 03:25 PM 01/13/2004 -0600, you wrote:
>Try this. It's better. 5-4-5 rhyme scheme in the Florentine style. 
>Inspired by HRM Miguel at his Coronation.
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>© 2004
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>ED Reese
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>Call to Estrella
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>Red arrow flying!
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>Black Star Rising
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>over Blood Red Sun.
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>Glory to be won!
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>Deeds to be done
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>on the fields of dread.
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>Falcon will be fed!
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>War lies ahead
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>for the Black Star’s foe.
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>Dealing the death blow!
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>Foeman will know
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>King’s swift sword striking!
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>Lancers are charging!
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>Hard hooves drumming;
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>to iron-shod attack!
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>Foemen reeling back!
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>Bows sing, axes hack
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>brave souls are dying.
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>Falcon is flying!
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>Black Star rising
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>over Blood Red Sun.
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>FYI, Blood Red Sun starts in caps for the same reason Falcon and Black 
>Star are.
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